Beware your strap-line
I believe that the purpose of a strap-line is to enhance the possibility of someone buying your products or services.
I was walking through the City this morning and I noticed a van with the name of its business on the side. Whilst I can't remember the name of the company, I did notice it said, "caterers who care".
I thought that, whilst I would remember that strap-line, it wouldn't induce me to consider their services, because it was inviting me to assess its validity. I'd have to first use them before I could assess if the strap-line was true. It sounded like hard work. Anyway, I assumed that all companies cared about doing business.
At the beginning of the 20th century strap-lines such as, "purveyors of fine wines", described exactly what the business provided. Even today there are some companies that still have such strap-lines and, whilst they may seem quaint, at least they don't ask us to make a judgement about whether they care or not.
So, when creating your business strap-line, ask yourself, "does it describe what we do or does it invite people to have an opinion about our business?"
I was walking through the City this morning and I noticed a van with the name of its business on the side. Whilst I can't remember the name of the company, I did notice it said, "caterers who care".
I thought that, whilst I would remember that strap-line, it wouldn't induce me to consider their services, because it was inviting me to assess its validity. I'd have to first use them before I could assess if the strap-line was true. It sounded like hard work. Anyway, I assumed that all companies cared about doing business.
At the beginning of the 20th century strap-lines such as, "purveyors of fine wines", described exactly what the business provided. Even today there are some companies that still have such strap-lines and, whilst they may seem quaint, at least they don't ask us to make a judgement about whether they care or not.
So, when creating your business strap-line, ask yourself, "does it describe what we do or does it invite people to have an opinion about our business?"




2 Comments:
At 11:44 PM, June 07, 2008,
Anonymous said…
Thank you for taking the time to write that.
I am just deciding on a strap line for my business and was researching the subject when I stumbled upon your comments. I am going to take your advice when I decide - in fact I have removed over half of my list!! I am confident that what you say is true, so I'm going to end up with a strap line that says what I do, rather than one that invites doubt. Thanks again
Kris
At 10:47 PM, June 08, 2008,
Chris Allen said…
Thanks Kris. It is nice to know that I can be of assistance. Good luck with your venture!
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